Without Fear

Ryan K Lindsay – Writer

Month: April, 2013

Process Podcast: Chat with Allison Baker and Chris Roberson

I recently had the esteemed honour and pleasure to chat with Allison Baker and Chris Roberson from Monkeybrain Comics on The Process podcast.

Find details and listen to the episode right here.

The chat is a bit of a sprawl, mainly because of how I lead it. We delve into Allison’s theatrical background, then the politics of hanging toilet paper, I coin the new slogan for Monkeybrain, then Chris drops some knowledge on diligence and how his work at home week is structured. I felt like I learnt a tonne of things and came away mega-inspired so hopefully you will, too.

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You can also go through the back catalogue of Process eps and hear us regulars chat or pipe in some sweet guest interviews for your ears.

Enjoy.

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RKL Annotations – MLP Rainbow Dash

I’m a process junkie. I cannot get enough of it and while absorbing it and incepting myself is always fun sometimes you have to give back. I’ve read plenty of these issue walkthroughs and while I’m merely aping the best, and late to the game, too, I know I’d want to read this so I’m doing it for those three people out there who feel the same about this issue. In that spirit, I deliver here my thoughts on MY LITTLE PONY MICRO SERIES: RAINBOW DASH #2, an issue I scripted, Tony Fleecs illustrated, and IDW released in March of 2013. You can buy it here on ComiXology.

These are my thoughts, your interest and mileage may vary. Spoilers may abound.

PAGE 1

I wanted to start with some fun action the sort of Saturday morning cartoon in media res stuff that reels you in. I love the flow in the middle two panels. Also, the ‘Summerfell Festival’ is a nod to GoT’s Winterfell – which I actually haven’t read or seen.

The lead in description for Dash I did with the same style and tone as Stitch Jones is introduced in HEARTBREAK RIDGE.

And Tony Fleecs killed that Sonic Rainboom.

PAGE 2

I wrote that ‘20% faster’ line as an obvious nod to the ‘20% cooler’ meme and it was interesting to see fans react as either loving it or really not digging it. Some pony fans like the meme stuff, some do not. Me, I do. Dash going into the cloud works so well, because of Tony, and I love the spiralling line of the guitar falling.

PAGE 3
Notice how Dash’s goggles constantly move and are shifted by her (look for it throughout the entire issue)? I told Tony to treat them like Giles treats his glasses in BUFFY. He nailed it.

This cloud sequence is one of my favourite things I’ve ever written because it’s ‘kid creepy’ while still feeling light but it also has a superb page turn that Tony nailed…

PAGE 4

I was so pleased with myself for coming up with the ‘nightmare’ punchline. And Tony’s cloud face and electricity is so damn fine.

The bottom is the TANNHAUSER GATE speech from BLADE RUNNER turned Pony. A geek dream to do and I’m pleased with how well it fit the narrative as it explains a lot of the villain motivation. This is the official complication in two ways.

PAGE 5

Tall panels on the left will always make me think of Frank Miller.

The infamous TV panel. We ran this past Hasbro who approved it but putting TV, and a live news bulletin no less, was a big deal for Pony fans because it represented something new in the Pony world. I will say, it’s their world and I’m just allowed in it so I give them full credit. I just hope they come to dig it.

Also, that reporter’s name is Redford (name checked in the script only, never in panel) and he’s styled after Robert Redford’s character in ALL THE PRESIDENT’S MEN. No major reason, I just liked it.

“Your wings look like linguini” is the erudite Pony version of “Legs like linguini” – a Charlie Murphy’s True Hollywood Stories shout out from the Chappelle Show.

PAGE 6

Tony nailed the montage and it was super amazing to see Fortress of the Fantastic panel blow up on Pony forums.

Ah, the gremlins. These guys were my favourite part of the issue. They were so much fun to write – i aimed for a Stan Lee kind of vibe from them; loquacious, verbose, ridiculous. Also, sneaky Shakespeare quote steal.

PAGE 7

Kiwis was originally feijoas but was changed because no one knows what feijoas are. Also, both grow well in the shade, hence the reason to use them here.

“My Granny Smith would turn her shiny green cheek…” – not a line I ever thought would get past. Sometimes, kids, it pays to try.

I’m also pretty sure I put in this sequence, and the montage before it, because I got Paul Allor to read the script and he said I needed to have Dash fail more before finding the path to success. He was totally right and he saved my ass.

The line that crosses this page turn is stolen and Ponied from TOMBSTONE, the boss Earp western. Matt Meylikhov picked up on this which I was astoundingly impressed with.

PAGE 8

I’m happy with ‘epic fail’ being broken between the caption and an SFX.

I also like how this sequence reads as a little scene. It felt for me like something you’d see in the show.

PAGE 9

I asked Tony to ape the style and structure of Miller’s DKR on this page and he mammothly delivered. One of the prettiest pages in this issue.

In an earlier draft, old man pony turns up later and talks about wearing an onion on his belt.

I snuck the phrase ‘blood simple’ into a Pony book.  A Hammett/Coen Brothers reference to always make me smile.

I flat out stole the final lines here from Christopher Nolan’s THE DARK KNIGHT RISES.

PAGE 10

I originally just had the gremlin say “Like Sun Tzu says in ‘The Art of War’…” but Bobby sent me back a note simply saying “There is no Sun Tzu in Equestria. Greatest editing note ever. Feel free to make it your neck tattoo tomorrow.

I also fought for there to be a beat between what the gremlin says and then him landing and the FACE SFX. Did I make the right choice? I still feel I did.

PAGE 11

PLANET OF THE APES reference turned Pony and made a little safer for tiny ears.

Panel 4 – FIGHT CLUB line reference, toned down slightly.

PAGE 12

Ball lightning is a real thing. I just wish I’d maybe used it a little more, it’s cool and it turns up and then it kind of does nothing.

PAGE 13

I love these gremlins on this page. This is where I show them having complete and confident dominion over her. I like that they are winning and so easily. It really put Dash into the corner.

PAGE 14

I got to write a KRAKKA DOOM SFX. Comic writing bucket list become one step closer to fulfilment.

Applejack saying “Pork chops and apple sauce” is a Peter Brady line steal. Also, someone somewhere pointed out that this means Equestria has pork chops which means they eat pigs – and this made me laugh heartily. I guess Orwell wasn’t right after all, the ponies will really reign supreme.

Look at that watering system Tony drew on Tank the turtle. That thing is insanely amazing.

PAGE 15

Tony decided to draw Tank as being all inside his shell. Brilliant move.

Some people, the meme haters as I call ‘em, didn’t like the BROHOOF. When i told this kid at my book signing that there was a BROHOOF in there I got a BROHOOF from him. And it was pretty awesome.

Dash talks a lot at the end of this page. Sorry.

PAGE 16

The turn, where Dash finds out how to get the victory. This is her major character level up. Yet she’s still hella arrogant/self-involved through it all which makes me smile.

I was happy that Dash sees the truth in the flag which you’ll notice was in the very first panel. You know why it was there? Because I went back and wrote it in. That’s why first drafts suck, they rarely have the presence of mind to completely anticipate the end and then seed it in.

That last panel has a very oblique CHASING AMY line steal/mix up.

PAGE 17

Looking at it now, it feels like I’m just padding a page so I get the page turn for the big moment. I mean, this stuff needs to happen, and it’s nice to see one last moment of confident from the gremlins but otherwise this page is just moving us to the reveal…

PAGE 18

SONIC DOUBLE RAINBOOM – this was the whole reason I came up with this story. This was the very first thing that popped into my head and then I built a character piece around it. Truthfully.

I asked Tony to draw the cloud exploding like Alderaan does in STAR WARS. Again, he nailed it.

PAGE 19

Simpsons reference which tickled a lot of people from the response I got for it.

I love Redford’s V-Day speech here.

I made Applejack say ‘Darlin’’ which is apparently a faux pas on my behalf. Sorry.

Wait, go back one panel, I only just noticed Tank galloping in that second last panel.l Look at him, a little turtle, and he’s booking it. That’s hilarious.

PAGE 20

I started this final sequence with the CODA caption. I’m really glad they let me keep this because it is a coda and I hope some kid out there now knows what a coda is.

Originally the orthotics was a pedometer.

PAGE 21

Look at the name on the apple cart – RAINBOWIE’S APPLE ODYSSEY. Tony nailed the David Bowie design on this thing. A shame the letters cover up the great shot in Panel 1 for it.

I’m happy with the spacial movement between the final two panels.

Tony fit an astounding amount of story, movement, and dialogue into this page. All hail Tony.

PAGE 22

Full cart reveal, enjoy.

I generally write noir so my usual tendency would have been to leave Dash flightless forever but instead it was nice to write a little cartoon ending happiness for once.

They are literally leaving the story off into the sunset, you guys 🙂

SUMMATION

This issue was so much fun to write. It took a lot of drafts, and Bobby Curnow is an amazing editor to work with and he helped with quite a lot of story beats and character moments, and Tony Fleecs is the ultimate to collaborate with because he’s a wicked smart storyteller and he brings amazing skill and craft and presence to the page. In the end, I did a final pass on this issue like I was filling in dialogue for a 5 year old girl and it worked because it then came through flighty and fun. I also seemed to do little but steal lines from other cool stuff so that’s interesting to note…

I would absolutely work in the Pony world again. When writing becomes this much fun, why wouldn’t you?

Thank you and good day, sir.

OXYMORON HC in April Previews

The Oxymoron HC is a collection of stories featuring the Oxymoron character created for the ComixTribe book THE RED TEN. A plethora of creators banded together and made a bunch of short stories to honour and showcase the character and I was lucky enough to be one of them.

The Oxymoron HC is in April’s Previews and you can see the solicit info below.

To whet your whistle, I want you to know the following about the book:

I wrote a story and my regular partner in crime Daniel J Logan made it better with his art.

Paul Allor wrote what might be my favourite story in the book.

Jason Ciaramella, everyone’s favourite Eisner nominee, wrote a wicked story in there.

We ran a Kickstarter campaign and raised 300% of what we wanted.

Your preorders are appreciated and if you still need more convincing then you can download one of the stories for free right herehttp://bit.ly/OxyLivingDead.

Enjoy.

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Rainbow Dash One-Shot Sells in Top 100 for March 2013

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I am extremely happy to have a book sell in this position — and, yes, I know it has NOTHING to do with me. I’m still cool with that.

MY LITTLE PONY MICRO SERIES: RAINBOW DASH #2 landed in #91 for the sales charts for March 2013. It sold ~25,473 copies.

I am extremely excited to have a book land in the Top 100, though this is clearly because it’s a Pony book and I very deeply understand that. It doesn’t stop, however, the fact that it’s super exciting to see these sorts of numbers.

I also fuond it interesting to see what sold comparably. I’m honoured to be two places below DAREDEVIL: END OF DAYS and I noticed I’m two places ahead of James Tynion IV’s TALON. Let the rivalry begin, post haste.

Lastly, if you picked up a copy, thank you so very very much. I appreciate it insanely.

My Ten Favourite Songs List

10, {explain} – Sarah Blasko
9, Breaking The Girl – Red Hot Chili Peppers
8, Paint It Black – The Rolling Stones
7, The Midnight Special – Creedence Clearwater Revival
6, The Man Comes Around – Johnny Cash
5, Modern Way – Kaiser Chiefs
4, Twilight Time – The Platters
3, Rough Diamonds – End Of Fashion
2, Gravedigger – Dave Matthews
1, Miss Misery – Elliott Smith

*Correct at time of publication. No doubt different now. Completely different. I know I’ve forgotten something.

The Great #fearagentreadalong – Part Two

After gloriously enjoying the cover, design, and introductory issue, it was time to read the rest of the first trade.

Well, what’re we waitin’ for?

I could use this HC to kill a man. Easily. Time for more #fearagentreadalong

The cover to #2 really doesn’t mess around. Tentacle POV-Huston with his kit on-ribcage stripped clean of grue in bg. #fearagentreadalong

Huston walking away with the monocle is better subtle storytelling than a fight scene could have replaced. Well played.#fearagentreadalong

Huston just wanting some peanut butter with a spoon is a magnificent way to humanise a guy amidst all the sci fi. #fearagentreadalong

Digging the low fi/sci fi approach. Huston is on a sentient ship but goes to a fridge, pulls out bourbon and leftovers. #fearagentreadalong

VHS. Boss. #fearagentreadalong

I could see VHS being easier to low fi decode in the future than our damn thumb drives.#fearagentreadalong

“The problem with Frazterga wasn’t that I was drunk–/–I just wasn’t DRUNK ENOUGH.” — Heath Huston, Fear Agent.#fearagentreadalong

A whole page of Huston grabbing bourbon bottles. THIS is exactly what I read it for.#fearagentreadalong

I love that they’re happy to allow Huston to run away in pretty much open fear. It shows he’s smart.#fearagentreadalong

The face on Huston as the tentacles grab him, on P. 52, is a great Tony Moore face. That large eye really pops. #fearagentreadalong

Man, I dig the concentric blue blasts from Huston’s gun. That’s rad. ZAP-ZAP-ZAP #fearagentreadalong

‘Rick Remender is a gender bender.’#highart #fearagentreadalong

Really dig Mara’s design. Beautiful, functional, beautiful.#fearagentreadalong

Mara with the space uppercut on Huston. JAB #fearagentreadalong

Ending with an effective double page spread. And only one word. “…Earth.” Economy.#fearagentreadalong

So the first issue stood alone for introduction and now we get a larger tale. Take notice, this is how to do it. #fearagentreadalong

Love the almost Russian tundra colour scheme going on with the cover to #3. #fearagentreadalong

Though I’m pretty sure his gun fires blue circles, not orange. #nGLAYven #fearagentreadalong

Wow, Huston is really a dick to Mara. Is this the Bruce Campbell/Ash school of picking up? #fearagentreadalong

You know Huston’s a bachelor in space with that tube sock hanging around. Hate to see it face slap in zero G. #fearagentreadalong

I need to tell people to “Quit yer jawin’!” waaaay more often. #fearagentreadalong

That’s one hell of a sweet mental offer Huston makes for Annie. How can human-AI interactions mist me up? #fearagentreadalong

Great and varied robot designs. These suckers feel lived in. #fearagentreadalong

Huston just entered a Level Boss scenario: Robot Lair. #fearagentreadalong

Hmm, @Remender uses the captions to tell us stuff we can’t see so the narrative can rocket along. An intriguing device. #fearagentreadalong

I think you can hear the moment Huston falls in love with Mara. SHTUNK! #arrowstraightthroughtheheart #fearagentreadalong

The action in #3 really rachets up and builds to a very effective cliffhanger end. Craft and fun all in one. #fearagentreadalong

Dig that orange humming cover to #4. Yep, time for more #fearagentreadalong

Opening with Sam Clemens. Classy touch. Really brings more to this title. #fearagentreadalong

Man, imagine if somehow through space/time John Wayne could play Heath Huston. Or young Clint Eastwood. Imagine. #fearagentreadalong

Trying to think who could bring the best level of graininess to the character of Heath Huston today. #fearagentreadalong

“Tastes like sweet potato Guinness.” — how is this not a blurb on the back cover? #fearagentreadalong

“However, Troleen suspected Jentu’s involvement in the death of Tetald.” — this history lesson is crazy deep. #fearagentreadalong

“I’m gonna save my boy.” — and just like that, hope was injected into the narrative and it made me feel worse. #fearagentreadalong

A plant gun. For reals. #fearagentreadalong

The colour change during the attack as they sneak up upon the Tetaldians. Superb. #fearagentreadalong

That’s one hell of a bold way to close the opening arc. #fearagentreadalong

This entire opener has just been one big damned tease, and it’s 100% effective. Kind of amazing. #fearagentreadalong

The final page being black with one caption – has @Remender used that much? I’ve seen it a little lately from him. Hmmm? #fearagentreadalong

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